Essay 1- Sprinting past the finish line
I agree with the essay because cross country is a very grueling sport and to sprint to the finish line is one of the most rewarding things to do in the sport. And even if you don't do well at least you tried your hardest.
Essay 2- The wonders of the future
The future holds many things for us to imagine. There are connections between people made by the ideas of new inventions and shows about the future. The only reason for the connections is because the two or more people want the idea to become real so they can expearence it for themselfs.
Essay 3-I believe in hula-hooping
This is an interesting story which it doesn't really put an impression on me. It just tells me a woman lost wieght and got into a special community by hula hooping, you can to the with any activity you just have to look hard enough. So this is just a good wieght loss story in my eyes.
Essay 4-The key to a long life
It is interesting that the man who wrote this used facts to back up his opinion unlike anyone else's essay on this site whose essays i've read. I like this because he is telling you that people can help the selves live longer with happy and up beat activities. This is one of the better and well thought out essays.
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